http://smallbrownfrog.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] smallbrownfrog.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hp_goldenage 2014-10-25 07:17 pm (UTC)

I loved the way you described the momentary merging of memory and now, that moment when she was gasping for air in her memory and then realized it was happening in the present. It made it very real. I teared up just a little as I read.
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