http://lq-traintracks.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lq-traintracks.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hp_goldenage 2016-03-01 05:25 pm (UTC)

Oh what a beautiful little story! I love all of your sensory details -- the way you described Theo, the 'porcelain scars in the chocolate sauce'! I loved Charlie assessing Theo positively because of the Thestrals' response to him. And I really liked how you described asexual love and Charlie's feelings of isolation for feeling different, and of course ultimately his happiness in finding someone to love who can love him that same way back! Lovely!

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